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2015-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

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Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. I like to travel with a companion because traveling alone is so bored. Especially I like to chat and eating between meals during traveling. And I think traveling with a companion is more memorable.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],


I agree that traveling with someone is more fun and

exciting and you can make memories together whether

as a family or with a group of friends. :)


Teacher Sarah


Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

I like to travel with a companion because traveling alone is so bored.

>> I like to travel with a companion because traveling alone is so boring.
 Especially I like to chat and eating between meals during traveling.

>> Especially that I like to chat and eating between meals when traveling.
 And I think traveling with a companion is more memorable.

>> CORRECT

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