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Hi there my dearest [이름]!

Well, I agree that the use of a mobile phone depends on how the owner uses it.

And we do all have different reasons why we use it.
Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts. I will see you again next week so I hope that you will have a great weekend.
See you then! Thanks for today!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

How important is your mobile phone in your business and personal life?

Nowadays, the mobile phone is became more important.

>> Nowadays, mobile phones have became more important.

It has not only many benefits but it can be also very harmful.

>>  It does not only have a lot of benefits but it could also

Depending on How to use it and who uses it, it can be either useful thing or useless thing.

>> Depending on how we use it, or who uses it, it can either be a useful or useless thing.

So the user needs to clear the purpose of using mobile.

>> So the user needs to have a clear purpose in using a mobile.

In my case, I need it for communicate with others using Kakao talk and I need it as a portable dictionary or internet newpapper.

>> In my case, I need it to communicate with others sing Kakaotalk, and I need it as a portable dictionary or read newspapers on the internet.

 But I often waste my precious time using it.

>> correct!