homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
We need to smile and laugh all the time because it can really make us feel good.
In addition, having a good heart will make us happy that is why we can laugh.
I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.
Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.
T.Jeny
Hi Jeny^^
>>correct
We are becoming share each others when we are talking in the class.
>>We are starting to share our experiences in class.
I do it more than you.^^
>>I do it often.
Have a great Easter week.
>>Have a Happy Easter.
Are you satisfied with your life?
Yes, I satisfied with my life. It doesn\'t mean I am success.
>>Yes, I am satisfied with my life but it doesn\'t mean I am successful.
I have still a dream just like teenager.
>>I still have a dream like a teenager.
When I have something to dream, I feel that must be coming true.
>>When I have a dream I feel like it will come true.
I have a family, work and passion.
>>I have my family, work and passion.
My family and work motivate to have passion.
>>My family and work motivate me ta have the passion.
My passion is not settle for present.
>>My passion is not yet settled for now.
I want to make a different life. Now, I am nurse.
>.I want to have a different life now, that I am a nurse.
But before nurse, I am a young lady literary interest.
>>Before I became a nurse, I was interested with lady literary.
And after 5 year later, what am I to be?
>>After 5 years, I don\'t know what will happen.
I trid to continue asking myself. And I will find my new world.
>>I will continue to ask myself and find a new world
I am satisfied my life.
>>I am satisfied with my life.
And I enjoy seeking better satisfaction in my life every moment.
>>I am enjoying seeking better satisfaction in my life all the time.
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