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2015-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good afternoon, Teacher! I came back home now. On my way home, there are some full blown cherry blossom. I am sorry that this beautiful season will pass soon. What was the last movie you saw at the theater? Tell me about it (without spoiling the ending). Unfortunately, I haven't seen any movie at the theater lately. Instead, I watched a movie with my family throughout a IPTV service at home. Its title was 'Myeong Nyang' that means the name of war between Korea and Japan in the 15 century. This movie was the best movie that more than ten million Korean people saw last year. I was a little disappointed about the development of a story. I'm sure that I have a lot of expectations with that movie. The fact that over ten million people chose that movie made me expect too much. It is obvious that this movie was above-average. However, I wasn't enough satisfied with that.

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Hello Kaylee! Thanks for answering your homework. I have to disagree with you. I also saw that movie and I was blown away! Haha! The progress and pacing were a bit slow at first, but once the \'action\' started, it was just mind-blowing. I thought the movie was epic. :) Thanks for sharing your thoughts about this. Hope you could watch a movie soon! ^^ Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good afternoon, Teacher! >> CORRECT! I came back home now. >> CORRECT! OR >> I just got back home.On my way home, there are some full blown cherry blossom. >> On my way home, there were some fully-bloomed cherry blossoms. I am sorry that this beautiful season will pass soon. >> I feel sorry that this beautiful season will pass soon. Unfortunately, I haven\'t seen any movie at the theater lately. >> CORRECT! Instead, I watched a movie with my family throughout a IPTV service at home. >> CORRECT! >> an IPTVIts title was \'Myeong Nyang\' that means the name of war between Korea and Japan in the 15 century. >> Its title was \'Myeong Nyang\', which is the name of the war between Korea and Japan in the 15th century. This movie was the best movie that more than ten million Korean people saw last year. >> This movie was the best movie last year and more than ten million Korean people saw it. I was a little disappointed about the development of a story. >> CORRECT! >> a = theI\'m sure that I have a lot of expectations with that movie. >> I had a lot of expectations from that movie. The fact that over ten million people chose to see that movie made me expect too much. >> CORRECT! It is obvious that this movie was above-average. >> CORRECT! However, I wasn\'t enough satisfied with that. >> However, I wasn\'t satisfied enough with that.        

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