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2015-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

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Q. Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. >>I usually spend money right now when I earn it. Because my values is loving every minute. There is no knowing how people become. So I don't save money and afraid spending money. kk. And I think I am a little impulse buyer. It is the reason that I enjoy my money.

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Hi [이름]!   How are you? I appreciate you doing ths again. I have listed some corrections below for your reference. I hope that you are having fun with your friends. :) I\'ll talk to you tomorrow again.     = Teacher Bella =     I usually spend money right now when I earn it. >> I usually enjoy spending my money immediately whenever I earned it.   Because my values is loving every minute. >> Because I value every minute of my life.   There is no knowing how people become. >> We don\'t know how people are going to become. So I don\'t save money and afraid spending money. kk. >> That is why I prefer to enjoy life and I\'m not afraid of spending my money. Kk. And I think I am a little impulse buyer. >> And I think I consider myself as an impulsive buyer.   It is the reason that I enjoy my money. >> It is the reason why I simply enjoy my money.      

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