homework

2015-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

1. If it's all the same to you, let's meet on Tuesday instead of Monday. 2. The accident took place on Maple Street. 3. Children, your task for tomorrow is to learn this poem by chance . 4. Good-by and don't forget to keep in touch ! 5. The party was formal and dull until Mike arrived and broke the ice with his jokes. Then everyone began to relax. 6. Mr. [Name] is in charge of the Sales Department. 7. Will he ever come back? No, he left for good. 8. The car almost hit an old woman crossing the street. That was a close call. 9. He is on his way and will be here in ten minutes. 10. When his children broke a vase yesterday, he lost his temper and began to shout at everyone.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

You almost got your homework perfectly. Too bad. kkk

You only missed no. 3. But anyway, good job on this one.

Thanks a bunch!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

1. If it\'s all the same to you, let\'s meet on Tuesday instead of Monday.
>> correct!
2. The accident took place on Maple Street.
>> correct!
3. Children, your task for tomorrow is to learn this poem by chance .
>> by heart
4. Good-by and don\'t forget to keep in touch !
>> correct!
5. The party was formal and dull until Mike arrived and broke the ice with his jokes. Then everyone began to relax.
>> correct!
6. Mr. [Name] is in charge of the Sales Department.
>> correct!
7. Will he ever come back? No, he left for good.
>> correct!
8. The car almost hit an old woman crossing the street. That was a close call.
>> correct!
9. He is on his way and will be here in ten minutes.
>> correct!
10. When his children broke a vase yesterday, he lost his temper and began to shout at everyone.

>> correct!

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