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2015-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher Marie. It says that if someone had a cold, he/she doesn't catch a cold again because of immunity. By the way, it's strange that you had a cold twice lately. I hope you get well again. What is one thing you've never done but would like to do? Actually, I really want to be a mother who spends my time enough with my son. After I graduated from university, I have worked and studied until now. I have never stoped working or studying. I was a busy mom and I'm still a busy mom now. So I'm always sorry to my son. As many common mothers do, I want to have quality time enough with my son if I could do. I want to go to school with him every morning and prepare some snack for him after school. They're not special things, but, for me, the things that I usually can't do.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Thanks for answering your homework. This is a bit sad. On one hand, you\'re really trying your best to be a good mom to your son. On the other hand, you cannot do your duties well because of your work and studies. Don\'t worry. I\'m sure your son can understand your situation. :) Cheer up! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!It says that if someone had a cold, he/she doesn\'t catch a cold again because of immunity. >> CORRECT! >> wouldn\'tBy the way, it\'s strange that you had a cold twice lately. >> It\'s strange that you caught a cold twice lately.  I hope you get well again.>> I hope you get well soon.Actually, I really want to be a mother who spends my time enough with my son. >> Actually, I really want to be a mother who spends enough time with her son. After I graduated from university, I have worked and studied until now. >> After I graduated from the university, I have been working and studying until now. I have never stoped working or studying. >> CORRECT! >> stoppedI was a busy mom and I\'m still a busy mom now. >> CORRECT!So I\'m always sorry to my son. >> CORRECT! OR >> I always feel sorry for my son.As many common mothers do, I want to have quality time enough with my son if I could do. >> Like any normal mother, I want to have enough quality time with my son if I could. I want to go to school with him every morning and prepare some snack for him after school. >> CORRECT!They\'re not special things, but, for me, the things that I usually can\'t do. >> CORRECT! OR >> They\'re not really special things, but these are the things that I usually can\'t, but want to, do for my son.      

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