homework.
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Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree about this topic. Because I think the businesses exists for employees.
Without workers, the company couldn't exist.
Of course the hired and to hire employees were limited, but I consider the businesses should hire employees for their entire lives.
I also want to be hire and get some job when I go into the world. Kk.
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Thank you for doing the homework again.
It is always nice to hear your ideas.
I also agree with what you are trying to say.
I hope that you are having a great time!
= Teacher Bella =
I agree about this topic.
>> Correct!
Because I think the businesses exists for employees.
>> Because I think the businesses exist because of their employees.
Without workers, the company couldn\'t exist.
>> Without the workers, the company will not exist.
Of course the hired and to hire employees were limited, but I consider the businesses should hire employees for their entire lives.
>> Of course the hiring process is only limited, but I consider that the businesses should hire employees for their entire lives.
I also want to be hire and get some job when I go into the world. Kk.
>> I also want to be hired and get a job after finishing school. Kk.
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