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2015-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

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Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I agree about this topic. Because I think the businesses exists for employees. Without workers, the company couldn't exist. Of course the hired and to hire employees were limited, but I consider the businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. I also want to be hire and get some job when I go into the world. Kk.

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Hi [이름] -   Thank you for doing the homework again. It is always nice to hear your ideas. I also agree with what you are trying to say. I hope that you are having a great time!   = Teacher Bella =     I agree about this topic. >> Correct!   Because I think the businesses exists for employees. >> Because I think the businesses exist because of their employees. Without workers, the company couldn\'t exist. >> Without the workers, the company will not exist. Of course the hired and to hire employees were limited, but I consider the businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. >> Of course the hiring process is only limited, but I consider that the businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. I also want to be hire and get some job when I go into the world. Kk. >> I also want to be hired and get a job after finishing school. Kk.  

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