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2015-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Do you always follow the same pattern to relieve stress or do you try different things? I think I follow the same pattern to relieve stress nowadays. I fall as[이름]p when I am stressed out. It helps me to get rid of thinking nagative ideas. I tried to drink to relieve stress or meet friends and chat with them before but I was still thinking anout my stress after that so I found the another way to relieve stress by myself.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

How\'s your day? Hope you are having a good one.

I really agree that s[이름]ping is better than  meeting friends or drinking to be able to relieve stress since I would still think about the cause of my stress.

It is better to go to s[이름]p since we could not think of it and when we wake up, our minds would feel refreshed already.

So hope you had a good s[이름]p last night and you were able to get rid of your stress.
See you later!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Do you always follow the same pattern to relieve stress or do you try different things?

I think I follow the same pattern to relieve stress nowadays.

>> correct!

I fall as[이름]p when I am stressed out.

>> correct!

>> or; I go to s[이름]p whenever I am stressed out.

It helps me to get rid of thinking nagative ideas.

>> It helps me get rid of thinking about the negative ideas.
 I tried to drink to relieve stress or meet friends and chat with them before but I was still thinking anout my stress after that so I found the another way to relieve stress by myself.

>>  I tried to drink to relieve stress or meet friends and chat with them before but after doing these things, I was still thinking about it, so I found another way to relieve stress by myself.


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