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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [이름]!
How\'s your day? Hope you are having a good one.
I really agree that s[이름]ping is better than meeting friends or drinking to be able to relieve stress since I would still think about the cause of my stress.
It is better to go to s[이름]p since we could not think of it and when we wake up, our minds would feel refreshed already.
So hope you had a good s[이름]p last night and you were able to get rid of your stress.
See you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Do you always follow the same pattern to relieve stress or do you try different things?
I think I follow the same pattern to relieve stress nowadays.
>> correct!
I fall as[이름]p when I am stressed out.
>> correct!
>> or; I go to s[이름]p whenever I am stressed out.
It helps me to get rid of thinking nagative ideas.
>> It helps me get rid of thinking about the negative ideas.
I tried to drink to relieve stress or meet friends and chat with them before but I was still thinking anout my stress after that so I found the another way to relieve stress by myself.
>> I tried to drink to relieve stress or meet friends and chat with them before but after doing these things, I was still thinking about it, so I found another way to relieve stress by myself.
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