Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are right. We should help the poor.
And we should also be grateful for what we have.
Thank you for writing an essay,
I encourage you to work on your prepositions, be-verbs and tenses of your verbs.
Don\'t worry I am here to help you.
Can\'t wait for Friday to talk to you.
Teacher Nina
Hi! Nina!
>> correct
You sent me some homework.
>> You sent me a homework.
Here I answer your question.
>> Here is my answer to your question.
>> Here is my answer.
If I poor, I will not happy.
>> If I am poor, I won\'t be happy.
Because If I don\'t have any money,
>> Because I don\'t have money.
I will cold in winter. Or I will hot in summer.
>> I will feel cold in winter or hot in summer.
I will have to wait spring.
>> I have to wait for spring.
And I will hungry.
>> And I will be hungry,
We have to help poors.
>> We have to help the poor people.
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