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2015-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hi! Nina! You sent me some homework. Here I answer your question. If I poor, I will not happy. Because If I don't have any money, I will cold in winter. Or I will hot in summer. I will have to wait spring. And I will hungry. We have to help poors.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

You are right. We should help the poor.

And we should also be grateful for what we have.

Thank you for writing an essay,

I encourage you to work on your prepositions, be-verbs and tenses of your verbs.

Don\'t worry I am here to help you.
Can\'t wait for Friday to talk to you.

Teacher Nina


Hi! Nina!

>> correct
You sent me some homework.

>> You sent me a homework.


Here I answer your question.

>> Here is my answer to your question.

>> Here is my answer.
If I poor, I will not happy.

>> If I am poor, I won\'t be happy.
Because If I don\'t have any money,

>> Because I don\'t have money. 
I will cold in winter. Or I will hot in summer.

>> I will feel cold in winter or hot in summer.

I will have to wait spring.
>> I have to wait for spring.

And I will hungry.

>> And I will be hungry,
We have to help poors.

>> We have to help the poor people.

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