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2015-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher Marie. After our class, I searched for ‘Bataan Day’ which you told me today. We had a similar experience in the Japanese colonial period. I'd like to show my respect to the fallen patriots of the two countries. Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms: 1. On the ball 2. Once in a blue moon 3. A picture paints a thousand words 1. If you need some advice about a new project, I recommend you to meet Mr. [Name]. He is really on the ball as to that kind of tasks. 2. My brother seldom spends quality time with our family. We can see him at a family gathering once in a blue moon. 3. According to a Chinese class, 'Han Seo', a thousand hearings are not worth one seeing. This means that showing directly is sometimes more useful than explaining in words. The sentence, 'a picture paints a thousand words', can be understand in the same context.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework and for researching a bit about our holiday today. :) I know that most Koreans could relate to this since you were also under the Japanese rule a long time ago. Please check my corrections below. Have a great day ahead! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!After our class, I searched for ‘Bataan Day’ which you told me about today. >> CORRECT!We had a similar experience in the Japanese colonial period. >> CORRECT! >> in = duringI\'d like to show my respect to the fallen patriots of the two countries. >> CORRECT!1. If you need some advice about a new project, I recommend you to meet Mr. [Name]. >> CORRECT! He is really on the ball as to that kind of tasks. >> He is really on the ball when it comes to those kinds of tasks. 2. My brother seldom spends quality time with our family. >> CORRECT! We can see him at a family gathering once in a blue moon. >> CORRECT!3. According to a Chinese class, \'Han Seo\', a thousand hearings are not worth one seeing. >> CORRECT! This means that showing directly is sometimes more useful than explaining in words. >> CORRECT! The sentence, \'a picture paints a thousand words\', can be understood in the same context. >> CORRECT!  

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