homework.
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Choose ONE of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives - a) automobiles b) bicycles c) airplanes. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I choose A(automobiles). Because the develope of automobiles have enabled a huge thing. Surely, the exist of automobiles has pros and cons. For example,for talking about pros, We can easily travel around and save a lot of time.
On the oter hands, about cons, We depend on that a lot. I don't imagine the world wihtout automobiles. I think We become a slave of autos.
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I choose A(automobiles).
>> Correct!
Because the develope of automobiles have enabled a huge thing.
>> Because the development on automobiles has enabled a huge thing.
Surely, the exist of automobiles has pros and cons.
>> Surely, the existence of automobiles has pros and cons.
For example,for talking about pros, We can easily travel around and save a lot of time.
>> For example, talking about pros, we can easily travel around and save a lot of time.
On the oter hands, about cons, We depend on that a lot.
>> On the other hand, talking about cons, we depend on it a lot.
I don\'t imagine the world wihtout automobiles.
>> I can\'t imagine the world without automobiles.
I think We become a slave of autos.
>> I even think that we have become slaves of automobiles.
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