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2015-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

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Choose ONE of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives - a) automobiles b) bicycles c) airplanes. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I choose A(automobiles). Because the develope of automobiles have enabled a huge thing. Surely, the exist of automobiles has pros and cons. For example,for talking about pros, We can easily travel around and save a lot of time. On the oter hands, about cons, We depend on that a lot. I don't imagine the world wihtout automobiles. I think We become a slave of autos.

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Hello [이름] -   Thank you for always doing our homework.^^ I know you are busy with the research you are doing right now. I also agree on your idea about our topic. It is very well said. I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. Enjoy the evening! = Teacher Bella =     I choose A(automobiles). >> Correct! Because the develope of automobiles have enabled a huge thing. >> Because the development on automobiles has enabled a huge thing.   Surely, the exist of automobiles has pros and cons. >> Surely, the existence of automobiles has pros and cons.   For example,for talking about pros, We can easily travel around and save a lot of time. >> For example, talking about pros, we can easily travel around and save a lot of time. On the oter hands, about cons, We depend on that a lot. >> On the other hand, talking about cons, we depend on it a lot.   I don\'t imagine the world wihtout automobiles. >> I can\'t imagine the world without automobiles.   I think We become a slave of autos. >> I even think that we have become slaves of automobiles.  

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