homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
We need to have a good way of communication because it can really make us feel good.
In addition, having a good heart will make us happy that is why we can laugh.
I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.
Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.
T. Jeny
Face to face communication is one of the good communication ways, But not the best.
>>Face to face communication is a good form of communication but it is not the best.
My position is close to disagree.
>>I quite disgree with this opinion.
Because I have been had experience not able to say directly.
>>Because I was able to experience it.
If I have fault to my friend, I can\'t to say sorry face to face
>>If I did something wrong to a friend, I can\'t say it face to face.
And that case I write letter for my friend.
>>In that case, I write a letter to my friend.
It help the situation not awkward.
>>It will not make me feel awkward.
Another case, During I talk with you on the telephone, my listening skill is developing better than face to face communication.
>>In addition, whenever I am talking to you through the phone, my listening skill is more developed than having a face to face conversation.
Because I can focus on only your voice without facial expression and gesture.
>>Because I can only focus on your voice without seeing your facial expression and gesture.
I can\'t infer the meaning. I just have to listen. That\'s all my position.
>>As my conclusion, I will not infer any meaning, I will just have to listen.
Bye. See you tomorrow^^
>>correct
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