Homework ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]. ^^
I\'m sorry if I wasn\'t able to check your composition last night.
I hope you do understand.
I am looking forward to hear wonderful stories from you next week.
Please be careful with your tenses of your verbs.
I will be glad to help you with that.
Have a nice weekend.
Teacher Nina
1. Homework.
1) b,
>> correct
2) a,
>> correct
3) b,
>> correct
4) a,
>> correct
5) b
>> correct
2. Essay.
I ate a late lunch as you said that was a scrumptious meal after our class.
>> I ate my lunch late, as you said it was a scrumptious meal.
>> OR: I ate lunch after our class and it was a scrumptious meal.
But I had a pain of stomach, because it was too late meal.
>> But I had a stomachache because I had a meal late.
It affected a dinner.
>> It affected my dinner too.
So I took a digestive medicine.
>> So I drank medicine.
I look foward to get a good condition tomorrow.
>> I am looking forward to be in a good condition tomorrow.
>> OR: I hope that I will feel better tomorrow.
I cleaned my house in Seoul after lunch because there were many dust.
>> correct
Then I came back to my hometown by bus.
>> correct
I could enjoy a spring scene through the bus window.
>> correct
There were many flower and young leaves.
>> There were many flowers and young leaves.
The scenery was very beautiful.
>> correct
It made me happy and bright.
>> Did you mean: It made me happy and feel refreshed.
I arrived in cheong-ju bus terminal at pm 7:15.
>> I arrived in Cheong-ju bus terminal at 7:15 p.m.
At that time my younger sister picked me up with nephew by car.
>> correct
So I could come back in relax.
>> So I could come back at home and relax.
>> OR: So It would be convenient for me.
See you tomorrow.
>> correct
Thanks to your time.
>> Thanks for your time.
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