Homework ^^

2015-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. Homework. 1) b, 2) a, 3) b, 4) a, 5) b 2. Essay. I ate a late lunch as you said that was a scrumptious meal after our class. But I had a pain of stomach, because it was too late meal. It affected a dinner. So I took a digestive medicine. I look foward to get a good condition tomorrow. I cleaned my house in Seoul after lunch because there were many dust. Then I came back to my hometown by bus. I could enjoy a spring scene through the bus window. There were many flower and young leaves. The scenery was very beautiful. It made me happy and bright. I arrived in cheong-ju bus terminal at pm 7:15. At that time my younger sister picked me up with nephew by car. So I could come back in relax. See you tomorrow. Thanks to your time. - [이름] -

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름]. ^^

I\'m sorry if I wasn\'t able to check your composition last night.

I hope you do understand.

I am looking forward to hear wonderful stories from you next week.

Please be careful with your tenses of your verbs.

I will be glad to help you with that.

Have a nice weekend.

Teacher Nina


1. Homework.
1) b,

>> correct

2) a,

>> correct

3) b,

>> correct

4) a,

>> correct

5) b

>> correct 

2. Essay.
I ate a late lunch as you said that was a scrumptious meal after our class.

>> I ate my lunch late, as you said it was a scrumptious meal.

>> OR: I ate lunch after our class and it was a scrumptious meal.

But I had a pain of stomach, because it was too late meal.

>>  But I had a stomachache because I had a meal late.

It affected a dinner.

>> It affected my dinner too.

So I took a digestive medicine.

>> So I drank medicine.

I look foward to get a good condition tomorrow.

>> I am looking forward to be in a good condition tomorrow.

>> OR: I hope that I will feel better tomorrow.

I cleaned my house in Seoul after lunch because there were many dust.

>> correct

Then I came back to my hometown by bus.

>> correct

I could enjoy a spring scene through the bus window.

>> correct

There were many flower and young leaves.

>> There were many flowers and young leaves.

The scenery was very beautiful. 

>> correct 
It made me happy and bright.
>> Did you mean: It made me happy and feel refreshed.


I arrived in cheong-ju bus terminal at pm 7:15.

>> I arrived in Cheong-ju bus terminal at 7:15 p.m.

At that time my younger sister picked me up with nephew by car.

>> correct

So I could come back in relax.

>> So I could come back at home and relax.

>> OR: So It would be convenient for me.
See you tomorrow.
>> correct 


Thanks to your time.

>> Thanks for your time.
 - [이름] -

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