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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jeny^^
Now I start to read English book.
At least, over a 2 page a day.
I know that is not much. I try to make longer than this gradually.
1. She started dieting as a result she didn't lose weight.
2. The principal wants to see you for the broken window.
3. The matches were cancelled, owing to the factthat it rained.
4. The camel is an ungainly animal because of which it has a hump on its back.
5. I don’t know if we can buy a big home like that any way, I intend to buy it.
6. I was upset by his behavior due to this I chose not to make an issue of it.
Bye~~ Happy weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
There were some mistakes but don\'t let those mistakes conquer your strength.
I hope that you will still continue to develop this way.
You can learn from this process. ^.^ Just keep it up!!
T. Jeny
Hi Jeny^^
>>correctNow I start to read English book.
>>I am starting to read an English book nowadays.At least, over a 2 page a day.
>>At least 2 pages a day.I know that is not much.
>>I know that it is not that much.
I try to make longer than this gradually.
>>I will try to read more pages a days past by.1. She started dieting as a result she didn\'t lose weight.
>>She started dieting. Despite this she didn\'t lose weight.2. The principal wants to see you for the broken window.
>>The principal wants to see you about the broken window.3. The matches were cancelled, owing to the fact that it rained.>>correct
4. The camel is an ungainly animal because of which it has a hump on its back.>>The camel is an ungainly animal in that it has a hump on its back.
5. I don’t know if we can buy a big home like that any way, I intend to buy it.>>I don\'t know if we can buy a big home like that. Anyway, I intend to buy it.
6. I was upset by his behavior due to this I chose not to make an issue of it.>>I was upset by his behavior. Still I chose not to make an issue of it.Bye~~ Happy weekend.
>>correct
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