Homework

Hi there, my beautiful [이름]^^

I am totally fine with it, so you do not have to apologize~

Just take care of yourself more and make sure you won\'t miss any important appointment because of too much booze ;)

Anyways it truly happens, even to me, ha! ha!

See you later^^

Hello, teacher Rose!

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 It\'s [이름]. (Or should I say \'This is [이름]\'?)

>>CORRECT! (Both are correct)
 First of all, I\'m so sorry that I couldn\'t take a class on Friday.

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 Last thursday was my boyfriend\'s birthday and I drank too much.

>>Last Thursday was my boyfriend\'s birthday and I drank too much.
 As a result, I had been with a terrible hangover even until saturday.

>>As a result, I had a terrible hangover even until Saturday.
 It\'s the reason that I couldn\'t take the class.
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This week, I had a low attendance rate.

>>CORRECT!
 I really apologize to you for it.

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 The class was planned to be originally scheduled to start next week.

>>The class was planned to originally start next week.
 (Can I change this sentence to \"I planned for the class to be originally scheduled to start next week\"?)

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>>YOU MAY SAY: I originally planned to start the class next week.

(The placement of the adverb depends on what you really want to convey.^^)
 But I wanted to start as early as possible eventhough it is my greed.

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 So I changed the date that I start the class.
>> So I changed the date that I will start the class.
I hope your understanding my fault.

>>I hope you will understand my fault.
 I\'m going to try to participate the class everyday.
>> I\'m going to try to participate in the class every day.
Well, I think that I don\'t have enough space to write homework here.

>>Well, I think that I don\'t have enough space to write homework.
 I will continue my writing on next essay.
>> I will continue my writing on the next essay.
Anyway I hope that you are enjoying a good weekend.

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