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2015-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Hello again teacher Rose. I am curious about something suddenly . Which one is more natural sentence, 'I really want it' and 'I want it really'? I have known that 'I really want it' is more natural. But my friend didn't agree with me. Well, you know what? Because It is the class after a long interval, I'm so nervous before the class. I know that I should converse with you everyday to be good at speaking in English. But sometimes I think I don't want to do it because of nervousness Anyway the first topic that you gave me was 'What personal achievements make you proud?' Some personal achievements make me proud are very tiny thing but actually hard to do. It is to do what I have to do and what I decided to do. Somethings are like not to be late every class of my shcool, to study something every day that I decided to do myself, not to oversleep and to live a well-regulated life. Especially I am really proud of myself when I live a well-regulated life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]^^

What you are thinking is correct!

The position of really can change the meaning of the sentence.

Example 1:

I don’t really know-means that you are not sure about something.

Example 2:

I really don’t know- emphasizes that you do not know.

Hello again teacher Rose.
>>Hello again Teacher Rose.

I am curious about something suddenly.

>>I am suddenly curious about something.
Which one is more natural sentence, \'I really want it\' and \'I want it really\'?

>> Which one is a more natural sentence, \'I really want it\' or \'I want it really\'?
I have known that \'I really want it\' is more natural.

>>CORRECT!
But my friend didn\'t agree with me.
>>CORRECT!
Well, you know what?

>>CORRECT!
Because It is the class after a long interval, I\'m so nervous before the class.

>> Because I have started taking classes after a long interval, I was so nervous before the class.
I know that I should converse with you everyday to be good at speaking in English.

>> I know that I should converse with you every day to be good at speaking in English.
But sometimes I think I don\'t want to do it because of nervousness
>> But sometimes I think I don\'t want to do it because of nervousness.
Anyway the first topic that you gave me was \'What personal achievements make you proud?\'

>>CORRECT!
Some personal achievements make me proud are very tiny thing but actually hard to do.

>> Some personal achievements which make me proud are very tiny things but actually hard to do.
It is to do what I have to do and what I decided to do.

>>CORRECT!
Somethings are like not to be late every class of my shcool, to study something every day that I decided to do myself, not to oversleep and to live a well-regulated life.

>>Some things are like not to be late for my class, to study something every day that I decided to do myself, not to oversleep and to live a well-regulated life.
Especially I am really proud of myself when I live a well-regulated life.

>>Especially, I am really proud of myself when I live a well-regulated life.

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