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2015-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher Marie. Yesterday, it was raining all the day. It doesn't rain today, but the skies are still cloudy. I hope good weather from now on since I'm planning to trip this weekend.^^ If you could only eat one type of food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Why? I think this question is hard to answer. It says that the pleasure of eating is much bigger than anything else. I totally concurs with this saying. I usually enjoy various type of food besides Korean food. It is true that we can't give up this pleasure under no circumstances. Nevertheless, if I choose to eat one type of food, I would choose Korean food. First of all, I'm familiar with eating Korean food. Furthermore, Korean food is the only type of food I can make. Lastly, Korean food is healthy food that provides well-balanced diets.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! It seems like you really don\'t like rainy days. Haha! You have to tell me about your travel plans tomorrow. :) Thanks for doing your homework. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!Yesterday, it was raining all the day. >> Yesterday, it rained all day. It doesn\'t rain today, but the skies are still cloudy. >> It\'s not raining today, but the skies are still cloudy.I hope good weather from now on since I\'m planning to trip this weekend.^^ >> I hope the weather will be good from now on, since I\'m planning a trip this weekend.I think this question is hard to answer. >> CORRECT!It says that the pleasure of eating is much bigger than anything else. >> CORRECT!I totally concurs with this saying. >> I totally agree with this saying.I usually enjoy various type of food besides Korean food. >> Aside from Korean food, I usually enjoy various types of food.It is true that we can\'t give up this pleasure under no circumstances. >> CORRECT!Nevertheless, if I have to eat one type of food, I would choose Korean food. >> CORRECT!First of all, I\'m familiar with eating Korean food. >> First of all, I\'m familiar with Korean food.Furthermore, Korean food is the only type of food that I can make. >> CORRECT!Lastly, Korean food is healthy food that provides well-balanced diets. >> Lastly, Korean food is healthy and can provide us with a well-balanced diet.  

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