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2015-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher Marie. I came back home yesterday late night. I was too tired to do my homework. Please forgive my laziness.^^ If you were going on a twelve-hour flight and the only entertainment you could bring was a book, what book would you choose? I usually enjoy reading books although airlines provide their passengers entertaining service such as movies, games and various kinds of video. If I have to stay in flight for 12 hours, I would read a autobiography of [이름] Dae Jung who was the former President of Korea and also the winner of the Nobel Peace Prize. In my opinion, he was a special politician to remembrance in the way that he constantly tried to realize his ideal political thoughts. If I read his books, I could understand modern political history of Korea. Moreover, I could recognize his inner conflict which he had to experience in the process of compromising with reality to achieve his political goals.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Don\'t worry about it. You\'ve always done your homework and submitted it on time, so I\'ll let this one slide. :) Keep up the good work! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT! I came back home yesterday late night. >> I came back home late last night. I was too tired to do my homework. >> CORRECT! Please forgive my laziness.^^ >> CORRECT! I usually enjoy reading books although airlines provide their passengers entertaining service such as movies, games and various kinds of video. >> I usually enjoy reading books although airlines provide their passengers with in-flight entertainment such as movies, games and various kinds of videos. If I have to stay in flight for 12 hours, I would read a autobiography of [이름] Dae Jung who was the former President of Korea and also the winner of the Nobel Peace Prize. >> If I have to stay in a flight for 12 hours, I would read the autobiography of [이름] Dae Jung, who was the former President of Korea and also the winner of the Nobel Peace Prize. In my opinion, he was a special politician to remembrance in the way that he constantly tried to realize his ideal political thoughts. >> In my opinion, he was a special politician to remember because he constantly tried to realize his ideal political thoughts.If I read his books, I could understand the modern political history of Korea. >> CORRECT! Moreover, I could recognize his inner conflict which he had to experience in the process of compromising with reality to achieve his political goals. >> Moreover, I would be able to recognize his inner conflict, which he had to experience, in the process of compromising with reality to achieve his political goals.  

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