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2015-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Everyone loves Ruby because of her amiable nature. 2. You must resist the temptation to give intricate advice. 3. One of the main problems afflicting third world countries is unemployment. 4. The boy was reluctant to admit his guilt. 5. It has been more than five years since Rani met her parents. Now she is longing to see them.

강사 첨삭

 Hello [이름]!

Happy Day!  Thank you for sending this in.^^ How was the homework?  You still did your best to make one even though you don\'t like economy. You got 4/5and nice job on that....keep it up!!!

Talk to you in class! Take Care!

 

T. Jeny

1. Everyone loves Ruby because of her amiable nature.
>>correct

2. You must resist the temptation to give intricate advice.

>>You must resist the temptation to give unsolicited advice.

3. One of the main problems afflicting third world countries is unemployment.

>>correct
4. The boy was reluctant to admit his guilt.

>>correct
5. It has been more than five years since Rani met her parents. Now she is longing to see them.

>>correct

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