Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher Marie.
As I mentioned a little while ago, I'm going to postpone my class tomorrow.
I already do this on Power English website.
Tomorrow morning, I'm attending the conference which my professor requested his students to participate in.
It starts at 9 o'clock.
I hope you have a great weekend. Bye~!
Do you think marriage as an institution is outdated? Why or why not?
When I was young, I thought that marriage as an institution is old-fashioned.
Now, I don't think so anymore.
My thought was changed.
Of course, I totally agree with the opinion that women sacrifice more than men when they marry.
However, I think that we can be happier in our family than alone.
If you want to feel that happiness, you have to make your own family because your parents would pass away someday and your sisters and brothers also would leave you to their own family.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this topic. As someone who is still single, and who prefers to stay that way, I kinda have a different view on marriage. ^^ To each her own then. Anyway, enjoy your weekend and tell me about the conference on Monday.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good morning, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! As I mentioned a little while ago, I\'m going to postpone my class tomorrow.
>> CORRECT! I already do this on Power English website.
>> I already did this on the Power English website.
Tomorrow morning, I\'m attending the conference which my professor requested his students to participate in.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Tomorrow morning, I\'m going to attend the conference which my professor required us to participate in.It starts at 9 o\'clock.
>> CORRECT! I hope you\'ll have a great weekend. Bye~!
>> CORRECT! When I was young, I thought that marriage as an institution is old-fashioned.
>> CORRECT! Now, I don\'t think so anymore.
>> CORRECT! My thought was changed.
>> My opinion/view changed.
Of course, I totally agree with the opinion that women sacrifice more than men when they marry.
>> Of course, I totally agree that women sacrifice more than men when they get married.However, I think that we can be happier in our family than alone.
>> However, I think that we can be happier with our family than alone.If you want to feel that happiness, you have to make your own family because your parents would pass away someday.
>> CORRECT!
And your sisters and brothers also would leave you to their own family.
>> And your siblings would also leave you for their own family.
OR >> And your siblings would also leave you to be with their own family.
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