homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
You are improving, don\'t you aren\'t.
At fisrt, I can pick up synopsis.
>>At first, I will choose synopsis.
A good story has power to drag people attention.
>>A good story has the power to drag people\'s attention.
And it is possible to touch them.
>>And it is possible to touch their feeings.
Second, the factor is power of direction.
>>The second factor is the power of direction.
According to the understanding of story, who made the movie, the film can upgrade.
>>The film can upgrade with the director\'s point of view.
At last I can\'t say without the actors.
>>And lastly, the actors.
By the expression of actors, we can choose the movie to watch or not.
>>With the actors, we can determine if we will watch the movie or not.
But I think the harmony of factors is most important to make good movie.
>>But I guess the most important thing is harmony.
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