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2015-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Yes. because rich and farmous is I can do ever I want. and I like the rich and farmous long time ago.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Alice ^^

Yes, me too.

I want to be rich.

So we should study hard and get a good job, right?

I hope that all of your dreams will come true.

Thank you for doing your homework.

Please be careful with spelling of the words:

> beautiful

> famous

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


Yes. because rich and farmous is I can do ever I want.

>> Did you mean: Yes, because being rich and famous is what I want.

>> OR: I really want to become rich and famous.

and I like the rich and farmous long time ago.

>> And I\'ve been dreaming about it for a long time.

>> OR: I\'ve been wanting it for a long time.

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