homework
학생이 쓴 원문
This is my story. One part is so romantic and the other part is very shy.
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I remember when I met my present husband.
At that time, I was a student and I prepared to seek for a job.
I wanted to interview for entering hospital. The hospital which I want was far away from my home. I needed to stay place for my interview day. My friend allows me to stay her sister's house which is located near to my hospital. And I went to my friend's house. When I went to there, I know that my friend has another boy younger brother. He is now my husband. After finishing interview, I call him and say thank you for supporting your home. And we contact consistently as a phone. At last, we got close to lover. That might be my bravest moment. If I were not call him, we could have lived each other. I can't know the life.
See you next class^^
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
You were really brave ....heheheh...
We can encounter situations in life that will offer a good change in our life. Thank you for sharing your story and I know that this experience of yours made a big change in you life. That\'s why, I\'m very happy for you.
Continue to be happy!!!!
T. Jeny
>>correct
One part is so romantic and the other part is very shy.
>>A part of my story is romantic and the other is quite embarrassing.
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I remember when I met my present husband.
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I remember when I met my present husband.
>>I can still remember when I met my husband.
At that time, I was a student and I prepared to seek for a job.
At that time, I was a student and I prepared to seek for a job.
>>At that time, I was a student and I was prepared to look for a job.
I wanted to interview for entering hospital.
I wanted to interview for entering hospital.
>>I want to have an interview in a hospital.
The hospital which I want was far away from my home.
>>The hospital was far from my house.
I needed to stay place for my interview day.
>>I needed a place to stay for the day of my interview.
My friend allows me to stay her sister\'s house which is located near to my hospital.
>>My friend allowed me to stay at her sister\'s house which is located near the hospital.
And I went to my friend\'s house.
>>So, I went to my friend\'s house.
When I went to there, I know that my friend has another boy younger brother.
>>When I went there, I knew that my friend has a younger brother.
He is now my husband.
>>correct
After finishing interview, I call him and say thank you for supporting your home.
>>After the interview, I called him and said thank you for letting me stay at their house.
And we contact consistently as a phone.
>>From then on, we consistently contacted each other over the phone.
At last, we got close to lover.
>>Until we got close and had a relationship.
That might be my bravest moment.
>>correct
If I were not call him, we could have lived each other.
>>If I didn\'t call him, we couldn\'t have known each other.
I can\'t know the life.
>>I think I wouldn\'t have known about life.
See you next class^^
See you next class^^
>>correct
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