Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie.
I am a little bit disappointed that we have a class this Friday, Labor Day.
Of course, I'm alright because I'm not a worker.
For you, it's bad that you have to work that day.
Any way, enjoy your new weekdays!
How do you think technology, such as smartphones and social media, has changed the way we interact with people? Give specific examples.
I totally agree with the opinion that technology has changed the way we interact with people.
I don't often make a call after I used 'Kakao Talk', a mobile messenger application.
We can easily keep in touch with acquaintances through the technology.
I think this change is a natural thing considering busy lives of modern people.
In this condition, the technology can help people communicate with other people without big difficulty.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! It\'s okay. I am willing to work on Labor Day. ^^ I used to be grumpy about it, but I get bored when I stay at home for more than two days. So I guess it\'s better for me to work on that day. Thanks for doing your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! I am a little bit disappointed that we have a class this Friday, on Labor Day.
>> CORRECT! Of course, I\'m alright because I\'m not a worker.
>> CORRECT! For you, it\'s bad that you have to work on that day.
>> CORRECT! Any way, enjoy your new weekdays!
>> Anyway, enjoy your brand new weekdays!I totally agree with the opinion that technology has changed the way we interact with people.
>> CORRECT! I don\'t often make a call after I used \'Kakao Talk\', a mobile messenger application.
>> I don\'t often make calls after I started using \"Kakao Talk\", a mobile messenger application.We can easily keep in touch with acquaintances through the technology.
>> CORRECT!
>> the = thisI think this change is a natural thing considering the busy lives of modern people.>> CORRECT!
In this condition, the technology can help people communicate with other people without big difficulty.
>> In this situation, technology can help people communicate with other people without any difficulty.
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