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2015-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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What/When was the bravest moment of your life? When I try to learn new thins such as excercise, study or new technology, I think that the momenst is the bravest moment. To learn new things start from nothing. Therefore It is always apprehensive or fear moment. I against the fear. That the moment is the bravest time.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

We all have our own fear but we need to overcome that fear in order for us to be successful.

I hope you\'ll continue that level of positivity for our succeeding classes. c\",)
May you have a stress-free day ahead.
Take care!!!

~~~T. Jeny~~~

 

What/When was the bravest moment of your life?

When I try to learn new thins such as excercise, study or new technology,
>>When, I try to learn new things such as exercise, study or invent a new technology.

I think that the momenst is the bravest moment.

>>I think that is my bravest moment.
To learn new things start from nothing.

>>To learn new things and start from nothing.
Therefore It is always apprehensive or fear moment.

>>Therefore it is always an apprehensive or fearful moment.
I against the fear.

>>I am against the feeling of fear.
That the moment is the bravest time.

>>That is the bravest time for me.

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