homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jeny
I am sorry.
During we were talking, a delivery man came my home.
I was awkward that time.
1. Because he was lazy, He did not study well.
2. I saw him last month. and I haven’t seen him afterwards.
3. We missed the bus, so We were late.
4. As it was warm, we left the windows open.
5. This is the new radio and my father bought it yesterday.
강사 첨삭
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T. Jeny
Hi Jeny
>>correctI am sorry.
>>correctDuring we were talking, a delivery man came my home.
>>While we were talking, the delivery man came to my home.I was awkward that time. >>It was an awkward time.1. Because he was lazy, He did not study well.
>>As he was lazy, he did not study well. / He did not study well because he was lazy.2. I saw him last month. and I haven’t seen him afterwards.
>> I haven’t seen him since last month.3. We missed the bus, so We were late.
>>As we missed the bus, we were late. / We were late because we missed the bus.4. As it was warm, we left the windows open.
>>correct5. This is the new radio and my father bought it yesterday.
>>This is the new radio which my father bought yesterday.
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