Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie.
It's hump day today.
It is raining now.
I think it's a nice day to study.
I can't think to go out because of the bad weather today.
What do you think would happen if the drinking age in your country was lowered to eighteen?
Now, we are not allowed to drink under 19 years old.
It can be think considering that they are almost still young students.
Due to a high entrance rate of high school, they are almost high school students.
Therefore, if the drinking age was lowered to 18 years old, an academic atmosphere must be broken.
Moreover, many students don't have proper self-control and discipline about drinking although some students do.
Without exerting self-control, drinking can be like poison.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this. Knowing how much Koreans drink, especially when they start working in companies, I guess it wouldn\'t matter if they lower the drinking age by a year. ^^ Enjoy your day and cheer up!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! It\'s hump day today.
>> CORRECT! It is raining now.
>> CORRECT! I think it\'s a nice day to study.
>> CORRECT! I can\'t think to go out because of the bad weather today. >> I can\'t think of going out because of the bad weather today.Now, we are not allowed to drink under 19 years old.
>> Right now, those under the age of 19 are not allowed to drink. It can be think considering that they are almost still young students.
>> We should think about it considering that they are still young students.Due to a high entrance rate of high school, they are almost high school students.
>> Due to the high entrance rate in high school, most of them are still in high school.
Therefore, if the drinking age was lowered to 18 years old, an academic atmosphere must be broken.
>> Therefore, if the drinking age was lowered to 18 years old, the academic atmosphere might be broken.Moreover, many students don\'t have proper self-control and discipline about drinking, although some students do.
>> CORRECT! Without exerting self-control, drinking can be like poison.
>> CORRECT!
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