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2015-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi^^ You are my good teacher^^ ------------------------------- A good teacher is a strict teacher. Do you agree? In my case, when I learned something from a strict teacher, I felt nervous. And I did fault again. Sometime the tension works well memorizing. But tension gives stress. I don't feel happy. I think a good teacher is willing to wait a tardy step. It has much time to change their acting or attitude. But lastly, the students who believe their teacher change forward to good way.

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Hello [이름] Thank you for your essay and compliment!!! Read books and magazines, listen carefully and practice using English language are the basic steps for improvements. I know that you do have potentials in improving your skills, so focus the corrections that I\'m giving in our daily class. You can make a difference!!! SMILE!!! c\") Start your day right!!! ~~~T. Jeny~~~   Hi^^ >>correctYou are my good teacher^^ >>You are a good teacher.-------------------------------A good teacher is a strict teacher. Do you agree?In my case, when I learned something from a strict teacher, I felt nervous. >>In my case, I feel nervous when I am listening from a strict teacher. And I did fault again. Sometime the tension works well memorizing. >>Sometimes when the tension is intense the more I make mistake. But tension gives stress. I don\'t feel happy. >>I feel sad because it is stressful.I think a good teacher is willing to wait a tardy step. >>I think a good teacher is willing to wait for her student to learn every step of the way.It has much time to change their acting or attitude. >>It will take time for them to change their attitude.But lastly, the students who believe their teacher change forward to good way. >>Lastly, the student should believe that their teacher would change.

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