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2015-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher! I'm always surprised about your high awareness of Korea. Although I talked about uninteresting political issue today, you already have known a lot about it. I think this is because you always try to take a profound interest about Korea for your Korean students. I truly thank you. Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms: 1. Going bananas 2. A tough cookie 3. Sugar and spice 1. These days, the potato chips named "Honey Butter Chips" were very popular in Korea. To buy it, many people bear to wait in line for more than an hour. I don't understand why they go bananas for this snack. 2. It says that the equality of the sexes are nearly realized. However, discrimination against women still exist informally. So, you should be a tough cookie to compete with men, who have a dominant position. 3. My brother and I have quite different character though we were born from the same parents. We are like sugar and spice.

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Hi Kaylee! Thank you for the compliment. :) I try my best to keep myself updated with what\'s happening in Korea because some of my students are more interested in free conversation than in using the book. So I need to know the latest news, not just in Korea, but all over the world. :) Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher! >> CORRECT!I\'m always surprised about your high awareness of Korea. >> CORRECT!Although I talked about uninteresting political issue today, you already have known a lot about it. >> Although I talked about an uninteresting political issue today, you already knew a lot about it. I think this is because you always try to take a profound interest about Korea for your Korean students. >> CORRECT!I truly thank you. >> CORRECT! 1. These days, the potato chips named \"Honey Butter Chips\" were very popular in Korea. >> CORRECT! >> were = was To buy it, many people bear to wait in line for more than an hour. >> CORRECT! OR >> Many people bear waiting in line for more than an hour just to be able to buy it. I don\'t understand why they go bananas for this snack. >> CORRECT!2. It says that the equality of the sexes are nearly realized. >> CORRECT! >> are = is However, discrimination against women still exist informally. >> CORRECT! So, you should be a tough cookie to compete with men, who have a dominant position. >> CORRECT! OR >> So you should be a tough cookie to compete with men who hold dominant position.3. My brother and I have quite different character though we were born from the same parents. >> CORRECT! We are like sugar and spice. >> CORRECT!

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