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2015-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good afternoon, Teacher. I'm late to do my homework because of my class in school. Have a nice weekend. Do you think it's possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time? Give specific details and examples. I think this depends on each person's criteria for happiness. Let's suppose someone thinks that he or she has to spend much time with his(or her) family to be happy. In this case, he(or she) would feel unhappy, when he(or she) doesn't spend much time with his(or her) family due to busy work. However, if you admit that the happiness is not necessarily proportional to the amount of time with your family, you could look for another way of promoting happiness. I also agree with the later idea. Therefore, I believe that it's possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! You know what they say, better late than never. :) Thank you for always doing your homework. You are such a diligent student. :) I really like your answer here. It\'s witty, practical and direct to the point. Keep up the good work! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good afternoon, Teacher. >> CORRECT! I\'m late to do my homework because of my class in school. >> I did my homework late because of my class in school.Have a nice weekend. >> CORRECT! I think this depends on each person\'s criteria for happiness. >> CORRECT! Let\'s suppose someone thinks that he or she has to spend much time with his(or her) family to be happy. >> CORRECT! In this case, he(or she) would feel unhappy, when he(or she) doesn\'t spend much time with his(or her) family due to a busy work. >> CORRECT! However, if you admit that the happiness is not necessarily proportional to the amount of time with your family, you could look for another way of promoting happiness. >> CORRECT! I also agree with the later idea. >> CORRECT! >> later = latterTherefore, I believe that it\'s possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time. >> CORRECT!  

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