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학생이 쓴 원문
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I don\'t like to tell the lies.
>> I don\'t like to tell lies.
>> OR: I don\'t like telling lies.
It because lying make person\'s distrust.
>> It is because lying makes a person distrust you.
>> OR: It is because lying can ruin someone\'s trust.
But sometimes we are faced with which need to say the lie in some circumstances.
>> But sometimes, we faced circumstances in which we needed to say lies.
>> OR: But sometimes, we faced situations in which we needed to say lies.
It is called White lie.
>> Those are what we call white lies.
For example, parents lie to their children that Santa Claus is real.
>> Correct
It makes children happy.
>> Correct
Another example, Doctors sometimes lie to their patients who suffering from an incurable disease about they can be completely curable.
>> Another example is this, doctors sometimes lie to their patients, who are suffering from incurable diseases, that they can be completely cured.
>> OR: Another example is that doctors sometimes lie to their patients, who are suffering from incurable diseases, that those diseases are completely curable.
Through this lie, some of patients get well.
>> Through this lie, some of the patients get well.
Small amounts of white lies cause good consequences.
>> A small amount of white lies can cause good consequences.
>> OR: A small amount of white lies, can sometimes be the cause of having good consequences.
>> OR: A small amount of white lies can create good consequences.
So I think people need to tell the truth, but small white lies are necessary.
>> So I think people need to tell the truth, but small white lies are sometimes necessary.
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