Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, it is a exquisite Friday Jessie!
Thanks not to have a class in Friday, I could come back home, my real home. I has been 2 months not to see my family. I'm really glad to see my family again. I suppose I should have placed my friend on my work instead, therefore I'll be able to stay home into this Saturday. I've got to go to Busan for my part time job. I want to stay more!
See you!
<Essay>
I totally agree. We've learned the basic knowledge in a elementary school and a middle school. So I personally think it's time to take a course that students want. We don't have to learn all things we don't want. For example, a lot of students learning liberal arts won't want to study math. What we only need is the four fundamental arithmetic operations. It's not effiecient to learn what we don't want.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I\'m glad that you had time to do your homework. ^_^
Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I totally hope that you enjoyed your weekend.
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Yes, it is a exquisite Friday Jessie!
>> Yes, it is an exquisite Friday Jessie!Thanks not to have a class in Friday, I could come back home, my real home.
>> I\'m thankful that we didn\'t have class on Friday because I could go to my real home.
I has been 2 months not to see my family.
>> It has been two months since I last saw my family.
I\'m really glad to see my family again.
>> Correct!
I suppose I should have placed my friend on my work instead, therefore I\'ll be able to stay home into this Saturday.
>> I should have let my friend work for me instead, if ever, I\'ll be able to stay at home this Saturday.
I\'ve got to go to Busan for my part time job.
>> Correct!
I want to stay more!
>> Correct!See you!
>> Correct!<Essay>I totally agree.
>> Correct!
We\'ve learned the basic knowledge in a elementary school and a middle school.
>> We\'ve learned the basic knowledge in elementary schools and middle schools.
So I personally think it\'s time to take a course that students want.
>> Correct!
We don\'t have to learn all things we don\'t want.
>> We don\'t have to learn all the things that we don\'t want.
For example, a lot of students learning liberal arts won\'t want to study math.
>> Correct!
What we only need is the four fundamental arithmetic operations.
>> Correct!
It\'s not effiecient to learn what we don\'t want.
>> Correct!
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