homework

2015-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. We live in a village which is infested with rats. 2. This is the school which He studied . 3. This is my brother whom you met yesterday. 4. Julius Ceaser came to Britain in 55 BC And He was a powerful Roman general. 5. The boy complained to the teacher because his watch had been stolen.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

I commend for  answering your homework!!!! You made a good job on your homework. Please don\'t forget to memorize or remember the words so that you can use it on your daily conversation. I encourage you to read and meet new words so that it can improve your vocabulary skills.

T. Jeny

 

1. We live in a village which is infested with rats.

>> The village where we live is infested with rats.
2. This is the school which He studied .

>>This is the school where he studied.
3. This is my brother whom you met yesterday.

>>correct
4. Julius Ceaser came to Britain in 55 BC And He was a powerful Roman general.

>>Julius Ceaser who came to Britain in 55 BC was a powerful Roman general.
5. The boy complained to the teacher because his watch had been stolen.

>>The boy whose watch had been stolen complained to the teacher.

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