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Meaning of someone A tell some advice to one man B is, A want to have B encouragement.
And if B think A’s advice is really helpful to him or her, maybe B would listen carefully to A’s advice.
But if not, B dosen’t concentrate to A’s speaking.
In the former case, this advice maybe cause good result to B.
But sometimes, when we want to own resolution, we don’t want any advice.
And it is not always produce the same results as all people experienced.
Like this, people need some advice from elderly or experience person, but not everytime.
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Meaning of someone A tell some advice to one man B is, A want to have B encouragement. >> The reason why a man (A) tells some advice to another person (B), is to give an encouragement.And if B think A’s advice is really helpful to him or her, maybe B would listen carefully to A’s advice. >> If B thinks that A\'s advice is really helpful for him or her, maybe B would listen carefully to A\'s advice.But if not, B dosen’t concentrate to A’s speaking. >> But if not, B would not concentrate to what A is saying.In the former case, this advice maybe cause good result to B. >> In some cases, giving an advice can cause good result to B.But sometimes, when we want to own resolution, we don’t want any advice.>> But sometimes, when we want to own the resolution, we don\'t want any advice.And it is not always produce the same results as all people experienced. >> And it is not always producing the same results as what other people had experienced.Like this, people need some advice from elderly or experience person, but not everytime.
>>In conclusion, people need some advice from an elderly or an experienced person, but not all the time.
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