Homework
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1.I drink water.
2.I hit my cheek.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for sharing things that you do to stay awake in school.
I also drink water and do some stretching to keep me awake.
I am always infront of the computer all day long.
So, stretching is very important for officer wokers like me.
I stand up if I don\'t have a class.
I also inhale deeply and shrug my shoulders, lifting them high up to my ears.
I shake my head slowly.
I also do some leg extensions. Extending my legs straight out infront of me so they are parallel to the floor.
I stretch my back with a \"big hug\" and stretch my back and shoulders with a \"leg hug.\"
These are some stretching techniques that I do to keep me awake.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
1.I drink water.
>> CORRECT 2.I hit my cheek.
>> I hit my cheeks.
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