Homework

Hello, Teacher. My father came back home today. I'm so glad that he came back home. I missed him and I also had a difficulty to take care of my son alone. Anyway, have a nice weekend! What is your opinion about violence in TV, movies, and video games? Suggest a way to stop this. I think this resulted from the competition in those market. To attractive people's attention, they generate violent contents more and more. As a mother, I'm really worried that children watch violent scenes without any censorship. In my opinion, the best way to stop this is that we don't see those kinds of products and consequently make low ratings about them. Of course, it's not easy to bring that results. So, until the matter is resolved I will try for my son not to watch them.

Hi Kaylee! Your father got back in time for Parents\' Day! You must be over the moon when you saw him. :) Thanks for doing your homework. You did a good job here. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher.>> CORRECT! My father came back home today. >> CORRECT! I\'m so glad that he came back home. >> CORRECT! I missed him and I also had a difficulty to take care of my son alone. >> I missed him. Moreover, I had a hard time taking care of my son alone.Anyway, have a nice weekend! >> CORRECT! I think this resulted from the competition in those markets. >> CORRECT! To attractive people\'s attention, they generate violent contents more and more. >> To attract people\'s attention, they generate more violent contents. OR >> To attract people\'s attention, they generate more violence in the story. As a mother, I\'m really worried that children can watch violent scenes without any censorship. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, the best way to stop this is that we don\'t see those kinds of products and consequently make low ratings about them. >> In my opinion, the best way to stop this is not to watch those kinds of movies, TV shows and videos, and, consequently, give them low ratings. OR >> In my opinion, the best way to stop this is to withdraw our patronage of these movies, TV shows and video games.  Of course, it\'s not easy to bring that results. >> Of course, it\'s not easy to see the results.So, until the matter is resolved I will try for my son not to watch them. >> So, until the matter is resolved, I will try not to let my son watch them.