Homework

2015-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher. It's Monday today. I hope your new week is nice. Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms: 1. To feel a hole in (one's) heart 2. To have a heart of gold 3. To have a heart of stone 4. Heart to heart 1. When they decided to divorce, they exchanged hurtful words each other. This made them feel a hole in their heart. 2. While many parents expect their children to study well, I want my son to have a heart of gold. 3. Although you have a heart of stone, you can't help feeling sad about a big earthquake of Nepal. 4. As I get older, I feel that having a true friend who I can talk heart to heart is difficult.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I like your sentences today. They were simple, but practical and realistic. Good job! Please check my corrections below. CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! It\'s Monday today. >> CORRECT! I hope your new week is nice. >> CORRECT! 1. When they decided to divorce, they exchanged hurtful words each other. >> When they decided to get a divorce, they exchanged hurtful words with each other. This made them feel a hole in their heart. >> This left them with a hole in their hearts.2. While many parents expect their children to study well, I want my son to have a heart of gold. >> CORRECT! 3. Although you have a heart of stone, you can\'t help feeling sad about a big earthquake of Nepal. >> Although you have a heart of stone, you can\'t help feeling sad about the big earthquake in Nepal.4. As I get older, I feel that having a true friend who I can talk heart to heart is difficult. >> As I get older, I feel like having a true friend whom I can talk heart to heart with is difficult.

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