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2015-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. Thank you for listening today. I was really excited to hear that news. The article related to my grandfather is linked below. http://news.kbs.co.kr/news/NewsView.do?SEARCH_NEWS_CODE=3073782&ref=A (Unfortunately, this speaks in Korean.) Today, I made some sentences for a presentation next week. Could you read and review some of my sentences? The aim of Lindholm's paper is to defend the view that we should embrace plural justification of human rights. He argued that it facilitates internally well-grounded endorsements of human rights in differing normative traditions. The authors of UDHR had two main premises. They made the UDHR had practical commitments to heed the inherent freedom and equal dignity of all human beings. Premise 1 shows that the commitment is based on a public moral principle of non-exclusive, mutual solidarity encompassing all human beings in the present-day world, bridging our cultural, ethnic, religious and ideological divides.

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Hi Kaylee! Thank you for sharing that wonderful news with me. It definitely brightened up my day too! Kudos to your grandfather for pursuing his dreams despite his old age. May he become an inspiration to your son. :) Have a great day! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! Thank you for listening today. >> CORRECT! I was really excited to hear that news. >> CORRECT! The article related to my grandfather is linked below. >> CORRECT! http://news.kbs.co.kr/news/NewsView.do?SEARCH_NEWS_CODE=3073782&ref=A >> CORRECT! (Unfortunately, this speaks in Korean.) >> Unfortunately, the language is in Korean.Today, I made some sentences for a presentation next week. >> CORRECT! Could you read and review some of my sentences? >> CORRECT! The aim of Lindholm\'s paper is to defend the view that we should embrace plural justification of human rights. >> CORRECT! He argued that it facilitates internally well-grounded endorsements of human rights in differing normative traditions. >> CORRECT! The authors of UDHR had two main premises. >> CORRECT! They made the UDHR had practical commitments to heed the inherent freedom and equal dignity of all human beings. >> The UDHR was made to have practical commitments to heed the inherent freedom and equal dignity of all human beings. Premise 1 shows that the commitment is based on a public moral principle of non-exclusive, mutual solidarity encompassing all human beings in the present-day world, bridging our cultural, ethnic, religious and ideological divides. >> CORRECT!

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