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2015-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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My best friend is sue-a. because sue-a is kind. but when I saw sue-a first she was not same personailiy like me and sue-a and I and sue has a many fight but I don't know the reasen but sue-a and I are made up a verry good friend.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Alice. ^^

Happy Wednesday!

How are you today?

I feel a bit sad because we are not going to have our class.

I think you have an important appointment today.

Of course, I do understand.

I am excited to talk to you soon.

Thank you for sharing about your best friend.
I hope that your friendship will last long.

Have a great day. Take care.
Teacher Nina


My best friend is sue-a.

>> Correct

>> Better: My best friend is Sue-a.
because sue-a is kind.

>> Because she is kind.
but when I saw sue-a first she was not same personailiy like me and sue-a and I and sue has a many fight but I don\'t know the reasen but sue-a and I are made up a verry good friend.

>> Did you mean: When I saw her for the first time, her personality was different from mine.  She usually fight with other people, I don\'t know the reason why but we became very good friends.

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