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2015-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good afternoon, Teacher! I'm writing a paper to presnt in calss next week. Of course, I have to wirte this in English. In this class, I had an experence to wirte an essay in English two months ago. Then, you're been a big help. Today, I prepared a question for that calss. Doesn't it result in different outcomes in practice, when we come to conceptual agreements of human rights on the basis of differing normative traditions? I am concerned that advances in human rights norms through this way wouldn't be able to properly deal with "Muslim women's issue". If the agreement is based on the premise of their particular normative tradition, does Muslim women's issue, from prohibiting driving to honor killings, become out of question?

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Hello Kaylee! I\'m not sure if I got the gist of what you were trying to say here, so just review my corrections below. Take note of typographical and spelling errors. :) Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good afternoon, Teacher! >> CORRECT! I\'m writing a paper to presnt in calss next week. >> CORRECT! >> present, classOf course, I have to wirte this in English. >> CORRECT! >> writeIn this class, I had an experence to wirte an essay in English two months ago. >> CORRECT! >> experienceThen, you\'re been a big help. >> You\'ve been a big help then. Today, I prepared a question for that calss. >> CORRECT! >> classDoesn\'t it result in different outcomes in practice, when we come to conceptual agreements of human rights on the basis of differing normative traditions? >> When it comes to conceptual agreements of human rights, on the basis of differing normative traditions, does it result in different outcomes in practice? I am concerned that advances in human rights norms through this way wouldn\'t be able to properly deal with \"Muslim women\'s issue\". >> I am concerned that the advances in human rights and norms wouldn\'t be able to properly deal with \"Muslim women\'s issue\". If the agreement is based on the premise of their particular normative tradition, does Muslim women\'s issue, from prohibiting driving to honor killings, become out of question? >> Do Muslim women\'s issues, like prohibiting driving and honor killings, become out of the question if the agreement is based on the premise of their particular normative tradition?  

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