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2015-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

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I got up at 5:30 in the morning. I went to my company at 9 O'clock AM with my car. I usally use the car when I go to the office. I used the subway go to the office in last a few month. But I stop it. Because I spend time about 4hours 30minutes when I go the office and come at home.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^ Thank you for telling me about how you commute from work to your home. ^^ Your sentences are okay but I do encourage you to use compound or complex sentences. Also, it is never a good idea to start your sentences with the words \"but\", \"because\" and \"and\" because using these words will make a sentence fragment or an incomplete sentence. ^^   Good work all in all. See you in class! ^^   = Teacher Bella =   I got up at 5:30 in the morning.I went to my company at 9 O\'clock AM with my car. >> I usually get up at 5:30 in the morning and go to work at around 9 AM by car. I usally use the car when I go to the office.I used the subway go to the office in last a few month.But I stop it.Because I spend time about 4hours 30minutes when I go the office and come at home. >> I usually use my car when I go to work but last month, I took the subway. However, since it takes a total of 4 hours and a half to go to the office and return home, I stopped taking the subway.

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