Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher.
I'm so glad to hear that my talks can be a help to your conversation with other students.
Every evening, I think about the topic that I'm going to talk to you tomorrow.
The process that I think of the topic and make some sentences in advance is very helpful to me.
Of course, I still have difficulty when you ask me some unexpected question. ^^
However, I expect me to improve thanks to my efforts.
The social part of life at a college or university is as important as the academic part. Agree or disagree. Provide reasons for your choice.
I definitely agree with the opinion that the social part of life at a college or university is as important as the academic part.
If the social part of life at a college or university is not as important as the academic part, it's safe to say we may study only through online.
However, many people don't choose that way of studying.
This means that they regard college(or university) life as something including community life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for always being a ball of sunshine. You were such a delight in our class. Keep up the good work. Check my corrections below okay?
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher.
>> CORRECT!I\'m so glad to hear that my talks can be a help to your conversation with other students.
>> I\'m so glad to hear that the stories that I share can help with your conversation with your other students.
Every evening, I think about the topic that I\'m going to talk to you tomorrow.
>> Every evening, I think about the topic that I\'m going to talk to you about the next day.The process that I think of the topic and make some sentences in advance is very helpful to me.
>> Thinking of a topic and making sentences in advance are very helpful to me.Of course, I still have difficulty when you ask me some unexpected question. ^^
>> CORRECT!However, I expect me to improve thanks to my efforts.
>> However, I expect some improvement because of my efforts.I definitely agree with the opinion that the social part of life at a college or university is as important as the academic part.
>> CORRECT!If the social part of life at a college or university is not as important as the academic part, it\'s safe to say we may study only through online.
>> If the social part of life at a college or university is not as important as the academic part, it\'s safe to say that we can just study online.
However, many people don\'t choose that way of studying.
>> However, many people don\'t like that way of studying.This means that they regard college(or university) life as something including community life.
>> This means that they want their college life to include their social life as well.
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