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I am on a diet. I exercise the crossfit. Crossfit is composition of 'Cross training' and 'Fitness'. It has four component. It are Speed Skip, Squat, Push-up and Crunch. It is very hard training. I have been three days ago that exercise the crossfit. My plan is reducing the weight at five kilogram. I will exercising the crossfit everyday.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for your composition. ^^ Now, normally I would correct per sentence but this time, to improve on the flow of thought, I needed to rewrite the whole paragraph. Check it out; your first sentence had no connection to your second one but it held relevance to your 8th sentence. Read through my correction thoroughly for better understanding on comprehensibility and articulateness. ^^   Note: speed skip is better known as \"sprinting\" or you can also say \"HIIT training\". ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Bella==   I am on a diet.I exercise the crossfit.Crossfit is composition of \'Cross training\' and \'Fitness\'.It has four component.It are Speed Skip, Squat, Push-up and Crunch.It is very hard training.I have been three days ago that exercise the crossfit.My plan is reducing the weight at five kilogram.I will exercising the crossfit everyday.   >> I plan to reduce my weight by five kilograms so I am on a diet and started crossfit. Crossfit is a type of exercise regimen that combines \"cross training\" and \"fitness\". It focuses on body weight exercises such as sprinting, squats, push-ups and crunches. It is quite challenging and I have just started it three days ago but I plan to do it everyday.