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In general, people are living longer now. My grandmother is over ninety years old. She receive treatment as a inpatient when she is painful. And my mother goes to her mother's house to clean and she prepare some delicious food for her mother. And in my country, they offer free a vaccination for people over sixty years old. And for their health, many machine of working out are available to them. Recently, we can cure a cancer. And we are living a clean environment. They are the causes of this phenomenon that people are living longer.

Good morning! Thanks for sharing your opinion. Wow! Your grandmother is very strong. ^_^ Anyway, please go over the corrections. See you later! ~T. Jessie~ In general, people are living longer now. >> Correct! My grandmother is over ninety years old. >> Correct! She receive treatment as a inpatient when she is painful. >> She receives treatment as an inpatient when she is in pain. And my mother goes to her mother\'s house to clean and she prepare some delicious food for her mother. >> And my mother goes to her mother\'s house to clean and prepare some delicious food for her mother. And in my country, they offer free a vaccination for people over sixty years old. >> And in my country, they offer free vaccination for people over sixty years old. And for their health, many machine of working out are available to them. >> And for their health, many machines for working out are available for them. Recently, we can cure a cancer. >> Recently, we can cure cancer. And we are living a clean environment. >> And we are living in a clean environment. They are the causes of this phenomenon that people are living longer. >> These are the causes of this phenomenon. OR>> These are the reasons why people are living longer than before.