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2015-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. The chair which we gave him as a Teacher's Day present has a head that supports comfortably user's neck. So, it was a little expensive than others which don't have that feature. Anyway, see you on Monday. Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms: 1. Raise (or wave) a white flag 2. White lie 3. White as a sheet 1. Many parents, at the end of the day, raise a white flag, although they oppose their children's choice about career path. 2. I think that we don't need to be honest at every moment of life. Especially, if I can encourage someone by telling a white lie, it's not that bad. 3. When I informed him that he had to submit his assignment again, his face became white as a sheet.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Kaylee! Thanks for submitting your homework. Now I understand what kind of chair you were talking about. Thank you for explaining it more. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! The chair which we gave him as a Teacher\'s Day present has a head that supports comfortably user\'s neck. >> Our Teacher\'s Day present for him was a chair that supports the user\'s neck comfortably. OR >> We gave him a chair that would support his neck comfortably. So, it was a little expensive than others which don\'t have that feature. >> So it was a little more expensive than the other chairs.Anyway, see you on Monday. >> CORRECT! 1. Many parents, at the end of the day, raise a white flag, although they oppose their children\'s choice about career path. >> At the end of the day, many parents would raise a white flag even though they are against their children\'s career choice. 2. I think that we don\'t need to be honest at every moment of life. >> I think that we don\'t need to be honest every moment in our life. OR >> I think that we don\'t need to be honest all the time. Especially, if I can encourage someone by telling a white lie, it\'s not that bad. >> If I can encourage someone by telling a white lie, it\'s not that bad. 3. When I informed him that he had to submit his assignment again, his face became white as a sheet. >> CORRECT!

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