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My homeroom teacher's name is sun-a ham.
She is pretty.
She is kind.
I thanks her.
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HELLO [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework.
A teacher’s profession is an ideal profession.
Yet all teachers are not ideal.
There are many who are angry, beat students, scold them right and left, do not look neat in appearance, have no affection for students, are interested only in increasing their income, keep no touch with books, and are too much inclined to politics.
With the society going to the dogs, such teachers are ever on the increase.
Certainly they have no right to be treated as ideal teachers for no students, except the worst, would like to build their lives of them.
This shows that very few teachers can rightly claim to be accepted as ideal ones.
There are some who possess many qualities that make them to be likely claimants to this honorable position but a few shortcomings shatter their hopes to pieces.
This shows that an ideal teacher is not someone to be found here, there and everywhere.
He or she is really a rare object, and very few schools can boast to have such a teacher in their staff-list.
If we are to describe an ideal teacher in a few words, we must say that he or she should have the ability to serve as a model before his students.
An ideal teacher, above all, should be a good teacher.
His or her teaching ability should be such so as to attract the attention of the students easily.
He or she should teach in a way so that any topic, however hard it may be, can be easily understood by the students.
In order to teach well, the teacher himself or herself should have vast and deep knowledge.
He or she must be able to clear away students’ fear of studies and to turn them into store-houses of knowledge without which a refined and higher life cannot be lived.
An ideal teacher should have unbounded love and affection for his students.
He or she should be one who can be easily approached by them, for he or she should truly be their friend, philosopher, and guide.
If a student does something wrong and regrets it sincerely, the teacher, instead of punishing him, should deal so tactfully with him or her that the wrong-dear will ever refrain from doing such things in future.
However, if the fault is genuine and there is no regret for it, the teacher will not hesitate to take stern measures against such an action.
He or she will not allow discipline to be given the good-bye for the sake of showing love to a student.
He or she should be able to inculcate certain virtues among students, such as regular studies, punctuality, care of health, equal emphasis on reading and writing, perseverance, kindheartedness, and the like.
Most people would define a good teacher as someone who makes their students excel academically and do well on their tests.
I believe that’s almost right, but a little off.
I believe that a good teacher doesn’t have one dimension but two.
They don\'t only make you excel, but they make you want to go to school.
They care about the student’s insecurities and problems, and most importantly they are there to support you.
My favorite teacher is like that.
She has changed the way I see the world.
She isn’t one of those teachers that will give it their all just to be liked by the students.
She honestly doesn\'t fit in a category of teachers.
My favorite teacher is by far the best teacher I’ve ever had.
She keeps the class in order, yet manages to make it fun at the same time.
She’s always there for academic as well as personal help.
Honestly for the first time, I don’t want to pass the grade.
She taught me a lot.
She has taught me to appreciate the little things, never judge, and be happy about the work I create.
I believe that becoming half of the teacher she is would be an incredible achievement.
Not only because of her incredible teaching abilities, but because she made a difference in my life.
She showed me that hard work pays off, and that I should never give up.
These lessons will continue to have an effect in my life.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
My homeroom teacher\'s name is sun-a ham.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Sun-a Ham is my homeroom teacher\'s name.She is pretty.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: She is beautiful.She is kind.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: She is a kindhearted woman.I thanks her.
>> I thank her a lot.
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