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I think that governments need to invest buying computer technology. Computer technology support usability of life. But governments need to invest another things that invest social welfare, social service and plan economic activation. It is only my two cents. See you our class tonight Bella.

Hello [이름]! ^^ Thank you for expressing your opinion about our composition topic. However, be careful in stating your opinion. Compare and contrast my corrections to what you wrote. Reading what you wrote, it seemed like you can\'t decide which one should the government invest in but in putting conjunctions (check the corrections), it now shows that you both think that the government should both invest in computer technology and basic needs. ^^   See you in class!   = Teacher Bella =   I think that governments need to invest buying computer technology. >> I think that governments need to invest as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology instead of being spent on basic needs. Computer technology support usability of life.But governments need to invest another things that invest social welfare, social service and plan economic activation. >> Computer technology may be important in our lives but I also think that governments should also invest in basic needs like social services and welfare, as well as focus on economic growth. It is only my two cents. >> That is my two cents. See you our class tonight Bella. >> See you tonight in our class, Bella.