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2015-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher! I wonder you're all right because of the bad weather you said. I had good time with my family last weekend. Tomorrow, I'll tell you about it. In not less than 5 sentences, share your thoughts about this: People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. However, when you are doing something that you love, then you would never feel tired. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I agree with the opinion that we don't feel tired when we are doing something that we love. I think this can't be explained in terms of physical bodies. I'm assured that it is related to mental problem. In other words, we can't feel tired because of the anaesthetic effect which is provided by a great passion. In this respect, we should realize that everything depends on the way we look at things.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m looking forward to hearing your story later. I\'m glad you had a wonderful time last weekend. Enjoy your day! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher! >> CORRECT! I wonder you\'re all right because of the bad weather you said. >> I wonder if you\'re alright because of the bad weather that you\'ve told me about.I had good time with my family last weekend. >> CORRECT! Tomorrow, I\'ll tell you about it. >> CORRECT! OR >> I\'ll tell you about it tomorrow. - betterI agree with the opinion that we don\'t feel tired when we are doing something that we love. >> CORRECT! I think this can\'t be explained in terms of physical bodies. >> I think this can\'t be measured physically. I\'m assured that it is related to mental problem. >> I\'m sure that it is related to our mental state.  In other words, we can\'t feel tired because of the anaesthetic effect which is provided by a great passion. >> In other words, we don\'t feel tired because of the anaesthetic effect which is provided by our passion.In this respect, we should realize that everything depends on the way we look at things. >> CORRECT!  

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