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2015-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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My question is that what is your habit when you was young? I want to know the answer. because I want to success in my life and I want to teach my two sons. I think that person can have a successful through a good habit. For example, they usually like reading books and they had learned a working out for a long time. We have to pay attention to what the famous person's words. So then, we can get a better idea. I dream of becoming a famous teacher. So when I feel be tired, I like reading a famous person's essay. Because even though we can't meet them, we can know their habit. We have to try as much as we can like them.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing this Ms. [이름]. I hope you\'ll have the opportunity to ask this question to a successful person someday. And don\'t worry too much because I believe that you can teach your sons well. ^_^ Have a great day! See you later! ~T. Jessie~ My question is that what is your habit when you was young? >> My question would be, \" What were your habits when you were young? I want to know the answer. >> Correct! because I want to success in my life and I want to teach my two sons. >> Because I want to be successful and I want to teach my two sons. I think that person can have a successful through a good habit. >> I think that a person can have success through having good habits. OR>> I believe that if a person has good habits, he will be successful. For example, they usually like reading books and they had learned a working out for a long time. >> For example, they usually like reading books and they had been working out for a long time. We have to pay attention to what the famous person\'s words. >> We have to pay attention to a famous person\'s words. OR>> We have to pay attention to what a famous person says.  So then, we can get a better idea. >> Correct! I dream of becoming a famous teacher. >> Correct! So when I feel be tired, I like reading a famous person\'s essay. >> So when I feel tired, I like reading a famous person\'s essay. Because even though we can\'t meet them, we can know their habit. >> Correct! We have to try as much as we can like them. >> Correct! OR>> Do you mean: We have to try as much as we can to be like them.

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